2 - My first outline

Government surveillance, pro

I - Government surveillance has undoubtedly helped society feel safer by stopping many criminals and terrorist acts that could have been devastating. Therefore, making the steets more peaceful.

II - Has stopped terrorist acts

A: Yihadist operations
1: Possible attack on the Sagrada Familia

B: School shootings
1: Student caught by cameras stopped in Madrid

III - Criminals identified thanks to surveillance

A: Robbers identified
1: Man who robbed a woman caught and arrested with the help of a gas station's cameras

B: Internet documents traffickers put in prison
1: Police operation in Andalucía

IV - Streets are more peaceful

A: With more criminals put to prison people feel safer
1: Comparison study made three months ago on national scale

V - In conclusion, government surveillance is a great way to improve our security and make people less likely to commit mischievous acts.

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